Vocal Coach Comments from Jeannie Deva:
Really nice vocal quality and great song choice for you! To capture your treble vocal quality, your mic choice is perfect as is its placement and angle. Your rendition is a record copy, rather than attempting any kind of personalized version – which was done well. Being picky, in the first pre chorus, the two flips to the higher note can be achieved with more control by zeroing into the vowel sound of the words (door) and (more) and the same for the second pre with the words “along” and “want.” But, pickiness aside, you did a really great job!
Al Andrew; Working musician and mix engineer