Vocal Coach comments from Rachel Lebon:
Nice, sensitive rendition. Pretty voice. Good sense or rhythm and pulse. Sounds personalized. Not over-singing. The added studio effects do enhance the vocals quite a bit.
Towards the end, the repeated phrases sung need to indicate a change in attitude or intensity so they don’t sound recited, but sound like they are entering your mind as you sing them, which makes your rendition sound even more genuine until the very end. Enjoyed hearing you! Keep on singing!
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