Vocal Coach Comments from Jeannie Deva:
This is a good start by the three of you. Unfortunately the recording quality was very muffled so I was not able to hear the vocals well. Your drummer needs to practice his timing and keeping the rhythm consistent. Currently his playing is holding back the presentation of the song. I wish I could hear the vocals better so I could give you a critique on them, but from what I could hear, the vocal range was easy for you to sing, no strain, so that was good: Great that two of you can sing. You’re young so there’s lots of time to develop and as a band, achieve a unified sound.