Hi, I am Mike from Cornwall. I have been sing and writing songs for as long as I can remember and I just recently out playing live and trying to get known locally. I just love to sing and I do it every day lol.
Great performance! You hava an original voice and seem very comfortable performing this tune. Nice vocal range and vibrato. You’ve got a future my friend. Video and audio quality are crisp, which lends a solid representation of this song. I look forward to more submissions from you! Awesome lyrics too.
You are a very talented
guy. Good song writing, good vox, and good guitar support. I like it all.I’m
especially glad to hear you’re taking your gifts to the “live” arena. Playing out
live will help you more than you can imagine.One little tip: Audiences like it
when you sing TO them. How do we know you’re singing to us? Because you LOOK at
us when you perform. Dig? Keep going!KowBoy Tom
Awesome lyrics and you really have the pipes. I think you could hit both sides of the pond with your song writing. BTW loved Crime Writer.
If you bring a little more dynamics to Whisper on the vocals, I think you could really slay it. “Will you whisper just to me”… get a little more breathy and tender. Get close to the mic and maybe use a pop screen if your mic needs one. and get a little stronger @ “Fade in” and softer with “Fade out” More with “too much traffic”… and much stronger @ “pound my fist”.
Try recording it again, just for yourself, to see if that makes it really POP!
David Wayne Fletcher