Bio: I’m a 16 years old singer-songwriter from the Netherlands. I play the piano, guitar and flute and write about everything that pops into my head.
“Mondays” is a cool, mellow, tune. I can tell you put some work into this presentation. Good job! This song has a “wintertime” feel to it…peculiar and provocative. I enjoy the lyrics…they are tongue-in-cheek.
The idea is there but seems a bit long winded. All in all the song draws me in though and engages my interest for the entire listen. However, I would like to encourage you to work with a click track or metronome…something to help you with your timing. The song is a little disjointed and sloppy in places…all of the music and vocals will slide into place better with a consistent back beat :)
Still these are small criticisms and I do take into account your age. Very impressive and layered for a young songwriter. You obviously have a way to record and make videos…spend a lil' more time gettin' tight and new ideas will blossom from the practice. I can't wait to hear more!!! :)
Yep, I like this vocal a lot. Listened to it again today, while surfing the net…I like to listen without seeing the artist as well. Really cool vibe…